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The room was a mess : As I walked into the dark colored room, clothes laid sprawled along the floor. The duvet was scrunched in a pile in the middle and around it lay hundreds of uncompleted homework sheets.

The food was good : As I took a large bite into the heavenly delicious donut, my teeth chomped slowly like a sloth.

The teacher was mad : The Teachers red face explained the furious words escaping her mouth. As she moved closer, with each step I began to feel more and more frightened.

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